Last day of school

It was the last day of school on thursday I am really going to miss mr marks and the other teachers that is gone and i am also going to miss the year 8s they really helped me to be kind to other people and show some respected and also i really miss my friends i really liked that we took photos together it was really nice

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It was so cool that Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen Was caring and nice and he was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the Terrifying scary course

When I heard that we were going sailing I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous and i began shaking about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on the plastic rocking  boat on camp.

After looking up at the terrifying wall we went abseiling.

We went on a big hill to abseiling.

we went abseiling and I was very scared  

Rouise

The Accident

Mum dad and jack went to see the cow’s and the sheep.”Can i milk the cows for you” said jack.”Yes you can thanks for your help jack”so jack started his job milking the cow’s.”This is a fun job to do”.

“Jack” said mum “time for dinner” “coming” said jack so dad mum and jack started eating dinner. When jack was finished his dinner he put his plate on the bench.
He went to the garage and grabbed his four wheeler bike.

He rid his four wheeler bike up and down the hills until his mum said “jack time for bed”“ohhh but i don’t want to go to bed just one more minute”. “Okay one more minute” so up and down up and down. Than mum said “jack time for bed”.

“Coming” so jack went to put his four wheeler bike back in the shed and went inside to go bed. When it was the morning jack ask mum if he can ride his four wheeler bike.With his friends and mum said yes but you have to milk the cow’s “okay”.

So off he went to milk the cow’s by the time jack’s friends came he was finished milking the cow’s. So jack went to the shed and grabbed his four wheeler bike and his friends look at it.They were so jealous because he had a flash bike.

So jack said “by mum by dad” and off he went with his friends they went to the park and then they went down this long steep hill. They were going so fast that jack fell off and the bike  fell on him and his friend max went to call the ambulance.  The ambulance came and jack was so sore the ambulance push the four wheeler off him. Jack had to go to the hospital and his mum and dad came and said are you alright my son.He said don’t that much.

When jack came out off the hospital he was feeling much more better.

Cow that got stuck in the ice

  Cow That Got Stuck In The Ice

one cold snowy day there was a cows that got stuck in the cold ice. He got separated from the other 
cows he was so cold and lonely.He tried to move but he couldn't it was like he was a stadew. He missed his friends and family and his kids. He was so so hungry

He saw a light coming and he said moooooooo moooooo but they didn’t hear him They just kept on walking. It was pitch black dark light that he couldn’t see anything. He was frozen because he stayed.

He could see Some other cows that got stuck in the ice because it was getting a little bit lighter so he can see. He heard  mooing out loud so He just kept on calling out. He was mooing until someone came but there was nobody around. He was starting to get freeze from the ice because the ice was really freezing.

Than he started to move and juggle and then he heard a cracking sound he look down. He saw the ice cracking he started moving hard out and he finally he got free. So he went to help his friends and family so they can get free. They all got free and they all said moooooo mooooooo and they were all happy.

Shaylar's big day

“What a nice sunny day” said Shaylar “I am so glad that winter is over”. Shaylar didn’t need to get cold anymore, her coat had been growing all year so she was hot. The sun was shining on her as she was eating grass on the big paddock. “yum yum yum” grazing through the fresh green grass.

“Oh no”  Shaylar said. Those mean bossy sheep dogs were back. They were going to try and scare the ewes away. “Look” cried Shayler's friend Emma. “They are coming lets run away. “Woof woof”  barked those mean old  dogs.

“Woof Woof Woof” barked the dogs and  Shaylar was so scared. The sheepdogs were coming and  they were barking so loud that they made the ewes run even faster. “Shaylar” said Emma “they are putting us in the pen”. The sheep were going to get their wool off so they wouldn’t  get hot anymore.

When the ewes got to the shed Shaylar’s friends were scared and confused . “Don't worry we came here before” said Shaylar “No I don't remember anything” said Emma and her friends.The next day all the sheep were glad waiting outside the shed.They were getting ready to get shorn.

“Those Dogs again they are going to kill us.” “No” cried emma “They are just putting us in the pen.“ “Get off my back” Emma said to them “You are too heavy for me”.

“LOOK!!!” said Emma “the farmer is coming.” “Oh no” cried Shaylar “I am so scared because when he shorn us it might hurt”. The farmer came to get Shaylar, she was so terrified. “Let me go” cried Shaylar. All she heard was a razor sound ssssss ”Ahhh” she saw her wool come off. She thought she was going to die.

After all of that she felt better because she wasn't so hot anymore her and her friends where so happy and they ate the fresh green grass. But they were so embarrassed because they had no more wool to hide their bodies.

The farmer put us back to the pen and when shaylar saw her paddock she said “Home sweet home”. Shaylar and her friends were happy to be back home and with their family.

Sally and the cheese

This is a presentation about sally and the chesse

Tension graph

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The Boy Who Cried Wolf

This is my score for the boy who cried wolf

Beauty and the Beast

listen to ‘Dj beaty and the beast’ on Audioboo

I have been reading beauty and the beast it is so cool to read and if i had to vote for this book i will give it a 10 out of 10

Cross Country

We had been training for months and findly the cross country had arrived. I was so nervous because i thought I was going to lose.

When mrs Jarman took us to the start line i was feared with butterflies and mr burt said ,on your marks get set go, and I ran with lots of joy.

When I was running the mud was so slippery and slimy. The mud went up my legs and it was so gross. When I was running I was going to stop put i told myself keep on running keep on running.

When I was running I stop because i was so exhausted but then i didn’t give up so i kept on running. I tried to catch up to the girl in front of me and her name was nikki. But i didn't because  she was too fast  for me.

Speech Marks

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

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“ Good morning,” said the check-out lady. “Do you have your Fly Buys card? ”

Joe had a really sore tummy. “I can’t go to school,” he groaned.

“ I don't think so “ replied James.

“ Yes” Bob replied. “ That's what I'm going to do “.

 “Is that what you were after?” asked Sally.

“Hello “, said Tony.

” I want the ball “ yelled Bill to all the other players.

” What’s the time’ asked Mark?. “It’s 9 o’clock” replied

Tom.

“ It isn't fair!” he complained bitterly. “ I always have to wash the dishes”.

“Oh no!” cried Jake. “ I don't want to go swimming! “

“ What do you want to do when you grow up “ said John.

“ I don’t know” replied Dan “ I might be a pilot”.

I watched carefully as the teacher did the example. “Now have a go at doing it yourself  “ she said. I still wasn’t sure so I asked her to go through it again.

“ What are your hobbies “ asked Jill.

“ Well “ said Jack ” I like collecting model cars”.

How dull laughed Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to Jill for the rest of the day

” I am tired “ the boy said and then drifted off to sleep.

Jack And The Magic Harp Letter

130 Pt England Rd  

Point England

Auckland 1072

Dear Mum,

I am really sorry for selling the cows for something I wanted. Please forgive me for the wrongs I have done, I won’t do it again. I wanted to buy the bee and the harp for you and me to have I thought it will be fun for both of us. Please do not punish me I will not do it again.

Thank you

Jack

The Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs their mum told them to decided to move out and live their own fortune.So off they went to make their own house and live there own fortune.

The first little pig made his house out of straw. It was so easy for him that pig was like the lazy one. the first little pig was just relating on his chair  then he could hear something. He saw a wolf from out of his window. He was coming up from the frost. So the 1st little pig  ran to hide and the wolf said.

“Little pig “little pig let me “ in and the first pig said “ not by my hairs of my chinny chin chin”. Or I “ will huff and I'll  puff and I will blow your house down”. So he huff and he puffed and he blow the house down and he eat the first little pig.

The  second little pig made her house out of sticks it took a bit long to make her own house.  she was a little bit clever. When she was impressed about her work on her house. She just sat down on her chair until she saw a big bad wolf coming out of the her brothers house.He sniffed and he said “ I can smell bacon ”.

The wolf said “ little pig  little pig let me in.”  “Not by my hairs of my chinny chin chin”. “Or I will huff and i’ll puff and i will blow your house down”. So he huff and he puffed and huff one more time and he blow her house down. He eat the 2nd little pig “umm yum”.

 The 3rd little big had the branes he made his house out of bricks it took a long long  time for him to finish. After he finish his long work to build his house he saw the big bad wolf. He ran inside and lock the doors and waited.

He heard a knock It was the big bad wolf knock knock “ little pig  little pig let me  in”.  “not by my hairs of my chinny chin chin “. Or i “ will huff and i’ll puff and i will blow your house down “. So he huffed and he puffed and he didn't blow the house down so he did it again.

So he huffed and he puff and he huff and he puff again and he couldn't blow the house down. From the window the 3rd little pig was getting cheeky to the big bad wolf outside he was so tired. But then he had a different plan.

The big bad wolf climb on the house and inside the 3rd branny pig was making very very very hot pot of  water. Than the big bad wolf was climbing down the chimney.  He went down and he landed in the very very hot boiling pot of water. The big bad wolf got his head brint first and the 3rd little pig lives happy ever after.

Jack And The Magic Harp

Orientation/Introduction Who were the characters and what was life like for them? (1st paragraph on page 2)	Answer jack and his mum. their life was not cool because they had no food.and they had nothing left to eat.
Problem (2nd paragraph on page 2)	when they had nothing to eat jacks mum told him to go to the fair and sell the black cow
Action 1 What did Jack do? (page 2- beginning of 5)	he went to the fair to sell the black cow and then a little man came up to him and said would you like to by a bee with a harp and jack said but i got no money and the little man said if you give me the black cow you can have the bee and the magic harp and he thought it will make hi mother laugh
Problem What did his mother think? (page beginning of 6)	his mother said that he was a foolish boy because he sold the cow for a magic harp with a bee.
Action 2 What did Jack  do? (page 6- beginning of 9)	he made his mother laugh till her side hurt.
Problem What did his mother think? (page beginning of 10)	she was very angry with him because they sill have nothing to eat and have no money.
Action 3 What did Jack had  do? What did his mother think? (page 10 - beginning of 13)	he had to sell the cows for money that he sode sell the cows
Problem What did his mother think? (page  beginning of 14)	he was a foolish.
Action 4 What was the news? What did Jack do? (pages 14-17)	the news was that he something much more better he sold the cow for a bee and a mouse and a grasshopper
Resolution What happened at the end? (pages 18-20)	he got married to the princess

A fifth birthday party

WOW!!! What a day at a fifth birthday party. Enjoying with my family and friends, as we all ate yummy food such as: Chocolate cake, mini Oreo cupcakes, Hawaiian pizzas and many many more. As I was eating, I got this weird feeling. So I decided to hope off the table. I went and enjoyed myself playing with the candy floss machine.

As I was playing with the machine, I grab one of my cousin and made her one. We both had fun eating it. After eating a huge piece, We both felt sick. Not long, I was playing on the bouncy castle. My mum was shocked. Because she saw me bouncing around  like a kangaroo. She had thought that I was sick. 

At the end of the day, Me and my cousin's went zooming up and down the steps. As I was running up, my mum yelled D.J we are off home, I replied and said wait I want to go and get me some lollies. My mum replied be quick, I will be in the car waiting for you. I said okay. 

Paper scissors rocks

 room 18 math group was playing a little game called paper scissors rocks.
the light green one is emmy and i am the light blue one I won the game and emmy lost the game
i have 51.8% and emmy and 48.2% so I am the winner.

MY PIS MOVIE

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THIS IS A MOVIE ABOUT SEAL,KILLER WHALES,PENGUIN

this is my friends

this is my friend ofa and the the other one is lizara than kevine

me

this is me when i was in room 12

Xtra math

For this week I got 19 smliey faces

my fraction

A MOVIE

What IfR3 (3) from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is a movie when I was in room 3 and when I was small

Gap5

On the xfactor My Favorited singing s are gap5 they are so good i just want to meet them.

Matarkik

Did you know that the seven stars helped our ancestors long time ago. There are about 500 star but you can only see the 7 star the brightest. The seven stars name is Waiti Waita Tupu-a-nuku Tupu-a-rangi Waipuna-a-rangi Ururangi Matariki. early in the morning matariki stars starts to shine up in the sky but you can't see it that much. When the maori people see the seven stars it means to them that it is going to be a warm winter.

In traditional times, Matariki was a season to celebrate and to prepare the ground for the coming year. The constellation was important for navigation and finding out about the coming seasons.

When we celebrate we go out to where you can see it the best but you have to wake up early so you do not miss it. You will have to wake up before 4:00am. That is why you need to put your alarm clock on if you have a celebration you normally have a big nice hungi. People that are in a community get together and look art it together.

how to make a chocolate cake

In the weekend Me and my sister was making a chocolate cake If you want to know the recipe Here it is
First you need sugar and butter so you put the sugar and butter in the bowl and mix it all together.
Then you get 6 eggs and then crack them in the bowl and mix it all together.
Next you need flour then you mix it again
Then you need baking powder then do the same thing mix it
after that you put coco in it so it looks like chocolate then mix it
Then you put it in the oven for like an 2min
and that's

  how you make a chocolate cake
 

My made up story

one day there was a girl name Rosie she love to bake with her mum. So her mum told her to go to the shops to buy eggs and milk so her mum gave her 10 dollars. So Rosie went to the shops and brought the eggs and milk.

When Rosie came out of the shops she was swing to plastic bag  around and around. Then she felt something tripping out of the bag Then she looked inside and it was the milk and it had prod out. She put the eggs down to throw the milk away then she went home and her mum said where is the milk and eggs. She was so scared she thought she was going to get big trouble. Then when her mum said eggs she knew that she forgot the eggs on the ground.

Rosie said to her mum that a boy called jack grabbed the milk and smashed  the milk on the ground. Then her mum said what about the eegs and then Rosie said he grabbed the packet and ran home with it. Mum was so mad that a boy did that to Rosie. Then her mum said where does he live and Rosie said around the corner. So her mum went to his house.

She found his house and she knocked on their door and Jack mum open the door and said how can I help you and Rosie mum said your son Jack had smashed my milk and sole all of my eggs. Jack mum said Jack get out here so Jack came and Jack mum said did you smashed their milk and sell their eggs and jack so no. Rosie mum looked at her and Rosie was so scared. When they got home Rosie mum got mad at Rosie and Rosie said sorry for lying.

Rosie mum said it is all right know me and you will got to the shops and rosie said ok. So they went to the shop and bought eggs and milk. So they went back home and made a yummy chocolate cake.

My made up story

One cold morning there was a man called jack he was on a plane then it broke down and he got stuck in the coldest driest on earth it  was antarctica. When it broke down  he fell on a ice and he was trying to walk but he couldn't because the strong wind blow and blow and blow him . Then when the wind blow him he rolled in a big cage.  

Jack was so scared because heard the wind blowing the water.  He went to see if it was the wind But it was not the wind it was a killer whale trying  to push the seal of the ice bregg. Then he heard author stopping sound then he went to see and it was a polar bear and then he was so so so scared because he thought that the polar bear was going to kill him  and then he saw a sharp sick then he went to strap the polar 4 times. then he noticed that the mother bear was or ready hurt then he was so sad that he did that to the polar bear.

So he decided to bury the polar bear in the ice so he started to dig dig dig until it was deep enough for the polar bear when it was deep gapped the polar bear and put it in the deep hole then he cared the polar bear with ice. Then he look on his hand and he saw blood on him so he knew that the ice was water. So he gaped some ice and rubbed it in so the blood can come of.  

My DLO

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This Is my DLO

the best tearcher

This is my teacher his name is Mr s he is so funny and cool at the same time. If you had him as a teacher you will think the same. Sometimes he just jokes around. Like he will say I will slap you on the head with his sandal!" but he is only kidding! :) .

My Story in the weekend

In the weekend my brother and I were bored so we went outside to play a game with the little kids next door. We asked, “can we play with you”. And they said, “yes”. My brother asked them what game they were playing. They replied back and said, “rugby”. “Yay”, I yelled. They didn't know how to play rugby so I said, “ohh, I don’t want to play now”.

So I went inside to my mum and I said mum I am BORED so my mum  said what do you want to do and so I said I don't know. So she replied back and said go and draw and then I said Ohh yeah.

so I told my brother then he said what are you going to draw so I said a pattern. Then he said what  kind of pattern and then I replied back and said any pattern. Then he came inside to draw with me and then we were not bored anymore.