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It was so cool that Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.
Mr Jacobsen Was caring and nice and he was our coach on the confidence course.
Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the Terrifying scary course
When I heard that we were going sailing I was nervous about sailing on camp.
I was nervous and i began shaking about sailing on camp.
I was nervous about sailing on the plastic rocking boat on camp.
After looking up at the terrifying wall we went abseiling.
We went on a big hill to abseiling.
we went abseiling and I was very scared
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