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Monday 10 June 2013

My made up story


one day there was a girl name Rosie she love to bake with her mum. So her mum told her to go to the shops to buy eggs and milk so her mum gave her 10 dollars. So Rosie went to the shops and brought the eggs and milk.


When Rosie came out of the shops she was swing to plastic bag  around and around. Then she felt something tripping out of the bag Then she looked inside and it was the milk and it had prod out. She put the eggs down to throw the milk away then she went home and her mum said where is the milk and eggs. She was so scared she thought she was going to get big trouble. Then when her mum said eggs she knew that she forgot the eggs on the ground.

Rosie said to her mum that a boy called jack grabbed the milk and smashed  the milk on the ground. Then her mum said what about the eegs and then Rosie said he grabbed the packet and ran home with it. Mum was so mad that a boy did that to Rosie. Then her mum said where does he live and Rosie said around the corner. So her mum went to his house.


She found his house and she knocked on their door and Jack mum open the door and said how can I help you and Rosie mum said your son Jack had smashed my milk and sole all of my eggs. Jack mum said Jack get out here so Jack came and Jack mum said did you smashed their milk and sell their eggs and jack so no. Rosie mum looked at her and Rosie was so scared. When they got home Rosie mum got mad at Rosie and Rosie said sorry for lying.


Rosie mum said it is all right know me and you will got to the shops and rosie said ok. So they went to the shop and bought eggs and milk. So they went back home and made a yummy chocolate cake.

2 comments:

Paige said...

What a long interesting story

Anamei said...

Hello Desrae
I really enjoyed your made up story it was very creative.
There was a couple of spelling mistakes their. You need to work on your variaty of sentence starters but other then that. It was great.
Keep the good work up.
Anamei lol !!!

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