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Wednesday 5 June 2013

My made up story


One cold morning there was a man called jack he was on a plane then it broke down and he got stuck in the coldest driest on earth it  was antarctica. When it broke down  he fell on a ice and he was trying to walk but he couldn't because the strong wind blow and blow and blow him . Then when the wind blow him he rolled in a big cage.  



Jack was so scared because heard the wind blowing the water.  He went to see if it was the wind But it was not the wind it was a killer whale trying  to push the seal of the ice bregg. Then he heard author stopping sound then he went to see and it was a polar bear and then he was so so so scared because he thought that the polar bear was going to kill him  and then he saw a sharp sick then he went to strap the polar 4 times. then he noticed that the mother bear was or ready hurt then he was so sad that he did that to the polar bear.



So he decided to bury the polar bear in the ice so he started to dig dig dig until it was deep enough for the polar bear when it was deep gapped the polar bear and put it in the deep hole then he cared the polar bear with ice. Then he look on his hand and he saw blood on him so he knew that the ice was water. So he gaped some ice and rubbed it in so the blood can come of.  

1 comment:

Khaia said...

you have a great imagination

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