Last day of school

It was the last day of school on thursday I am really going to miss mr marks and the other teachers that is gone and i am also going to miss the year 8s they really helped me to be kind to other people and show some respected and also i really miss my friends i really liked that we took photos together it was really nice

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It was so cool that Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen Was caring and nice and he was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the Terrifying scary course

When I heard that we were going sailing I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous and i began shaking about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on the plastic rocking  boat on camp.

After looking up at the terrifying wall we went abseiling.

We went on a big hill to abseiling.

we went abseiling and I was very scared  

Rouise

The Accident

Mum dad and jack went to see the cow’s and the sheep.”Can i milk the cows for you” said jack.”Yes you can thanks for your help jack”so jack started his job milking the cow’s.”This is a fun job to do”.

“Jack” said mum “time for dinner” “coming” said jack so dad mum and jack started eating dinner. When jack was finished his dinner he put his plate on the bench.
He went to the garage and grabbed his four wheeler bike.

He rid his four wheeler bike up and down the hills until his mum said “jack time for bed”“ohhh but i don’t want to go to bed just one more minute”. “Okay one more minute” so up and down up and down. Than mum said “jack time for bed”.

“Coming” so jack went to put his four wheeler bike back in the shed and went inside to go bed. When it was the morning jack ask mum if he can ride his four wheeler bike.With his friends and mum said yes but you have to milk the cow’s “okay”.

So off he went to milk the cow’s by the time jack’s friends came he was finished milking the cow’s. So jack went to the shed and grabbed his four wheeler bike and his friends look at it.They were so jealous because he had a flash bike.

So jack said “by mum by dad” and off he went with his friends they went to the park and then they went down this long steep hill. They were going so fast that jack fell off and the bike  fell on him and his friend max went to call the ambulance.  The ambulance came and jack was so sore the ambulance push the four wheeler off him. Jack had to go to the hospital and his mum and dad came and said are you alright my son.He said don’t that much.

When jack came out off the hospital he was feeling much more better.

Cow that got stuck in the ice

  Cow That Got Stuck In The Ice

one cold snowy day there was a cows that got stuck in the cold ice. He got separated from the other 
cows he was so cold and lonely.He tried to move but he couldn't it was like he was a stadew. He missed his friends and family and his kids. He was so so hungry

He saw a light coming and he said moooooooo moooooo but they didn’t hear him They just kept on walking. It was pitch black dark light that he couldn’t see anything. He was frozen because he stayed.

He could see Some other cows that got stuck in the ice because it was getting a little bit lighter so he can see. He heard  mooing out loud so He just kept on calling out. He was mooing until someone came but there was nobody around. He was starting to get freeze from the ice because the ice was really freezing.

Than he started to move and juggle and then he heard a cracking sound he look down. He saw the ice cracking he started moving hard out and he finally he got free. So he went to help his friends and family so they can get free. They all got free and they all said moooooo mooooooo and they were all happy.

Shaylar's big day

“What a nice sunny day” said Shaylar “I am so glad that winter is over”. Shaylar didn’t need to get cold anymore, her coat had been growing all year so she was hot. The sun was shining on her as she was eating grass on the big paddock. “yum yum yum” grazing through the fresh green grass.

“Oh no”  Shaylar said. Those mean bossy sheep dogs were back. They were going to try and scare the ewes away. “Look” cried Shayler's friend Emma. “They are coming lets run away. “Woof woof”  barked those mean old  dogs.

“Woof Woof Woof” barked the dogs and  Shaylar was so scared. The sheepdogs were coming and  they were barking so loud that they made the ewes run even faster. “Shaylar” said Emma “they are putting us in the pen”. The sheep were going to get their wool off so they wouldn’t  get hot anymore.

When the ewes got to the shed Shaylar’s friends were scared and confused . “Don't worry we came here before” said Shaylar “No I don't remember anything” said Emma and her friends.The next day all the sheep were glad waiting outside the shed.They were getting ready to get shorn.

“Those Dogs again they are going to kill us.” “No” cried emma “They are just putting us in the pen.“ “Get off my back” Emma said to them “You are too heavy for me”.

“LOOK!!!” said Emma “the farmer is coming.” “Oh no” cried Shaylar “I am so scared because when he shorn us it might hurt”. The farmer came to get Shaylar, she was so terrified. “Let me go” cried Shaylar. All she heard was a razor sound ssssss ”Ahhh” she saw her wool come off. She thought she was going to die.

After all of that she felt better because she wasn't so hot anymore her and her friends where so happy and they ate the fresh green grass. But they were so embarrassed because they had no more wool to hide their bodies.

The farmer put us back to the pen and when shaylar saw her paddock she said “Home sweet home”. Shaylar and her friends were happy to be back home and with their family.