Oktapodi short film

I am doing a short film review about Oktapodi .

WOW there were two octopus inside a tank and then they got separated. The orange octopus got mad at this chef because he took his true love. The orange octopus was thinking that the man will eat her.

The orange octopus was on the car to save the pink octopus, the man got a fright. Then the orange octopus was on the car window and the dangerous battle begun. The chef wanted to take the pink octopus to his restaurant so his restaurant can be the best, and so people can eat the pink octopus for dinner.

Camp

WOW camp is the best thing out of school because you get to sleep with my friends. It was the year 5 and 6 where having fun. We where doing cool activities we did amazing race. It was sad because my friend Quasia didn't come.

J.K. Rowling

Did you know that J.K. Rowling sold over 450million books. Harry Potter and the chamber of secrets is a great book that you can read. I think she likes to write books. It took her five years to edit and plan for just one book. It took her time to write Harry potter and the chamber of secrets.

You have to take time so people can read your work and so it can be perfect and your family will be happy for you. And you can plan it so there is no mistakes and you have to edit it. she check it before she gave it to people.


you have to make sense before you post it on your blog and hook your audience with action
so they will post a comment and you can read it


I wish that I was like her as a writer.